LOI+5

Introduction A. Hook B. Broad statement C. Narrow statement D. Thesis: Even though me and my dad’s loss of innocence were very different they were still life changing events 1. Body: Events that lead to the incident:
 * My dad’s grandma had a stock
 * People being different

What happened:
 * I experienced racism
 * My dad’s grandma went into a coma
 * And what all happened

How it affected our lives:
 * It changed our views on life
 * It was life changing
 * How it changed our lives

2. Conclusion:
 * General overview
 * Thesis again